[There, that's a lot better. Luka gently inspects the area around his neck for infection, trying to see how deep the parasite has burrowed into the skin. He's concerned; the risk of nerve damage is incredibly high as he's more or less cutting blind.
He pauses at McDonald's reaction, the terse sound in his voice.]
no subject
He pauses at McDonald's reaction, the terse sound in his voice.]
What's wrong?